English 330.4 Business Writing			Professor Carol Loranger	
2-3:40 pm TTh					414 Millett / 775-2961
012 LX						Office Hours: M 6pm, 
email: carol.loranger@wright.edu			TTh 12-2:00pm

Required Text: Roebuck: Improving Business Communication Skills
(Prentice Hall 1998)

Internet site:		
http://cal.bemidji.msus.edu/English/Morgan/Courses/EN293/ReviewingSite.html

Calendar:

March 28	Introduction, course coverage, expectations, challenges. 
Workshop: getting on line. 
Homework: Read Roebuck Chapter 7. Do exercises on disk: 
Chap. 7, Ex. 1; Chap. 7, Ex. 2, 3 or 4 (choose one). 
Prepare a concise (one page, single-spaced), 
conversational, well-planned print memo introducing 
yourself to me, your instructor. Tell me something 
memorable about yourself, indicate your future career aims 
and tell me what you would like to learn in this class. Use 
your best grammar, mechanics and spelling skills. Send a 
shorter, electronic mail memo to each of your fellow 
students in this course and to me. You may be slightly more 
informal in email than in your print memo to me. Use 
emoticons if you like, and omit the section on what you 
hope to learn in this course. 

March 30	Lecture: The communication process; elements of good 
business writing. Exercises and Memo(s) due. Workshop: memo 
and exercise critique.
Homework:  Read Chaps. 2 and 3. Do exercises on disk: 2.3, 
2.4, 2.5, 2.7, 3.2, 3.3.

April 4	 	Lecture/demonstration: appearance, style, correctness. 
Exercises due.  Group Workshop: Basic grammar and 
mechanics. Work in groups to complete handout exercises. 
Prepare audio-visual mnemonics to present to class on 
Thursday.
Homework: Read Chap. 10. Do exercises on disk: 10.1. 
Continue work on visual aids for group grammar lesson. 
Write a short print memo to me explaining the 
grammar/mechanics principle you are covering and why your 
visual aids are appropriate.

April 6		Group presentations. Memos due. 
Homework: Read Chap. 4. Do exercises on disk: 4.2, 4.4. 
Access and read the Internet site listed at the top of this 
syllabus. Spend some time over the weekend cruising the 
Internet. Find the website of a corporation of interest to 
you. Bring URL to class. Also, find an internet site 
offering information pertaining to a state, local or 
federal political, social, environmental or education issue 
of interest to you. Please, NO abortion or gun control. 
Bring URL to class. Using the evaluation guidelines in the 
site I've given you, prepare notes for an informal 
evaluation of one of the two sites you've found. Be 
prepared to discuss your site in class.

April 11	Lecture/demonstration: writing directly. Informal Internet 
evaluations due. Discussion: Qualities of good corporate 
websites. Workshop: draft a letter requesting information 
to your government representative, a university 
administrator or to a charitable organization. 
Homework: revise the letter. Read Chaps. 13 and 14. Do 
exercises on disk: 13.1, 13.2, 14.1. Prepare detailed notes 
for drafting your resume in class. Write print memo to me 
explaining what effect you hope your completed resume will 
have on a potential employer. Alternatively, write memo 
about your resume concerns. Find a corporate website for an 
employer in your future career path. Read it closely and 
bring URL to class.

April 13	Workshop: compare/critique resume notes with your team. 
Letter to gov't. representative (etc.) due. Look at 
websites for potential employers; plan how to write a cover 
letter to get you in the door. Draft resume and cover 
letter in class.
Homework: Finish resume and letter. 

April 18	Workshop: continue searching the Internet for information 
on your issue. Prepare Talking Points for oral 
presentation. Prepare quality visual aids for 10-minute 
presentation. Resume and letter due.
Homework: continue working on Talking Points and visual 
aids. Read Chap. 5. Do exercises on disk: 5.2, 5.3, 5.4 
(questions only on 5.4, don't revise).

April 20	Lecture/discussion: delivering bad news. Exercises due. 
Workshop: Draft a letter giving your employer notice you 
are leaving your job. 
Homework: Finish letter. Read Chap. 8 and "Collaborative 
Writing Strategies" from Chapter 9. Do exercises on disk: 
8.1, 8.2, 8.3.

April 25	Oral presentations. Handout: study guide for exam.

April 27	Wrap up oral presentations. Workshop: Team will collaborate 
on writing a 2-page memo containing a post-midterm critique 
of this course. Draft and polish in class. June 24 
exercises, in-class memo and letter of resignation due.
Homework: Read Chap. 11. Do exercises on disk: 11.1, 11.2, 
11.3 (use today's critique-writing team for 11.3. Write an 
email memo to each member (and to me) based on 11.3).

May 2		Exam

May 4	No class today

May 9	Web page Critique and Reports Project begins. Meeting 1: 
Review assigned website, select name for your team, assign 
duties and responsibilities, develop timetable. Remember to 
keep a file of all your team communications, meeting notes, 
etc. These are due as part of the assignment. 

May 11		Work on Critique and Progress Report.

May 16		Work on Critique and Progress Report. Progress Report due.

May 18		Draft version of Critique due today.

May 23	Workshop: draft, polish and complete memo assessing your 
progress this term. Begin compiling your course portfolio.
Homework: continue preparing course portfolio

May 25	Corrected draft Critiques returned. Revise Critique for 
emailing Critique must be mailed to corporate webmaster by 
classtime May 30. Email copy of Critique to me.
Homework: continue preparing course portfolio.

May 30	Team presentation of corporate web page Critiques. Hard-
copy and email critiques due.

June 1		Portfolios due. Have a wonderful summer!

Work: Three essential qualities of good business writing are clarity, 
concision and correctness. Another quality is completeness, by which is 
meant not simply that it contain all the information it must contain in 
good order, but also that it be completed in good time. It does you and 
your team no good to do brilliant work after the deadline. That is also 
true in this class, where learning good communication skills is our 
business. Because of that, each writing assignment will receive 2 
grades on a 100-point scale. One grade will reflect its being completed 
on time. Turn the assignment in at the beginning of class on the date 
due and it receives a 100 for completeness. If an assignment is turned 
in after class ends, it will lose 5 points. For every additional day or 
part of a day that it is late it will lose 10 points. The forms of 
business writing are fairly simple to master; what is trickier is 
writing within those forms day in and day out without losing your edge 
or becoming stale, dull and repetitive. To that end, the writing 
assignments for our class do repeat certain basic forms, asking you to 
move beyond mastery into something approaching a strong personal style. 
The second grade will reflect the quality of the writing (See Chapter 
2) and adequacy to the particular assignment. It likewise begins with 
100 points, with 5 points docked for every check-marked deficiency. The 
two grades will be weighed at 33% (on-time) 64% (quality).

Besides the writing assignments there are chapter exercises and some 
research and note-taking and online research assignments. I will also 
be asking you to make several informal presentations (see calendar). 

Evaluation:
memos, print and/or electronic	10%
letters				20%	
presentations 
grammar/mechanics 	  	 5%
	talking points		 5%
informal Internet evaluation	 5%
resume/cover letter		10%
progress report (team)		 5%
corporate web page 
critique (team)		 	15%
portfolio			10%
exam				10%
exercises on disk		 5%
        			_______
           			100%

Getting Along With the CEO:

Miss class at your peril. Do not call me to request extra time for 
missed work or to inquire what you've missed. If you do not wish to be 
docked for late or missed work, you must give me advance notification 
of any emergency absence from class, short of emergencies that occur on 
your way. Last minute computer/printer problems are not excused 
emergencies. Court dates, funerals, medical excuses, etc. require 
documentation, as do speed traps or personal heroics. If you have a 
child care problem, feel free to bring the child to class. S/he can 
draw on the chalkboards. 

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